tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post1418762456898146873..comments2024-03-28T14:11:02.991-04:00Comments on Still Writing: Out of Sight, Out of MindJ E Oneilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09780097298061829471noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-63716129275633670452010-11-30T17:24:01.213-05:002010-11-30T17:24:01.213-05:00I am in love with 'that'. OK in a first dr...I am in love with 'that'. OK in a first draft, but now I circle them when in revision / editing phase. Most go away.<br><br>Good advice on the sensory / action thing.M Paxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14096697282530998519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-82369525911711370072010-11-30T09:40:23.079-05:002010-11-30T09:40:23.079-05:00Good advice. I look foward to reading your manusri...Good advice. I look foward to reading your manusript. I applaud you for undertaking this challenge! Kuddos!Choiceshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14228987428444754162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-26748140426610688682010-11-29T19:46:22.253-05:002010-11-29T19:46:22.253-05:00Awesome advice. I'm currenlty working on weedi...Awesome advice. I'm currenlty working on weeding out all the 'sees' and 'felts' in my WIP :)Kristina Fugatehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18204372165725432422noreply@blogger.com