tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post8730797656739617437..comments2024-03-28T14:11:02.991-04:00Comments on Still Writing: Third Campaigner ChallengeJ E Oneilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09780097298061829471noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-89089490248429008542011-10-28T11:43:08.059-04:002011-10-28T11:43:08.059-04:00Good one! Well done!Good one! Well done!William Kendallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00331324250821836822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-29080322034783425112011-10-27T12:35:56.651-04:002011-10-27T12:35:56.651-04:00I'm a judge in the third campaigners challenge...I'm a judge in the third campaigners challenge and you have moved into the second phase of judging! Big congrats!!!Small Town Shelly Brownhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13535247595352753415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-18919719424751262032011-10-27T12:35:37.719-04:002011-10-27T12:35:37.719-04:00So creative!So creative!Small Town Shelly Brownhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13535247595352753415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-91147232756914475402011-10-25T10:16:27.171-04:002011-10-25T10:16:27.171-04:00So not fair to leave this as a cliffhanger. Well ...So not fair to leave this as a cliffhanger. Well described setting and an eerie future.K.T. Hannahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03477211734721721621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-48695876688868784422011-10-24T15:03:28.820-04:002011-10-24T15:03:28.820-04:00You left me hanging. That's not fair. I want t...You left me hanging. That's not fair. I want to know what's going to happen. Excellent work! :)David Powers Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-1934376747994437102011-10-24T08:52:24.395-04:002011-10-24T08:52:24.395-04:00I would like to know a lot more about this world! ...I would like to know a lot more about this world! <br>Mine is #25.Jenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12314617048592538691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-6002091919548306672011-10-24T06:59:02.246-04:002011-10-24T06:59:02.246-04:00Nicely done.mood(now following)Moody Writing@moode...Nicely done.<br><br>mood<br>(now following)<br><a href="http://moodywriting.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Moody Writing</a><br><a href="http://twitter.com/mooderino" rel="nofollow">@mooderino</a><br>no. 79mooderinohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-79973906512220514132011-10-23T22:20:26.217-04:002011-10-23T22:20:26.217-04:00I think that you did an excellent job with showing...I think that you did an excellent job with showing. I could visulize it very well. Great job, I liked.Mel Fowlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13058423111927116643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-75115031343181956622011-10-23T15:53:42.912-04:002011-10-23T15:53:42.912-04:00It sounds like the character lives in a dangerous ...It sounds like the character lives in a dangerous world--great writing!The Golden Eaglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-77158262386694382832011-10-23T00:57:15.313-04:002011-10-23T00:57:15.313-04:00Good job! I love the whole nuclear waste clearing....Good job! I love the whole nuclear waste clearing. I like your descriptions too.Michelle Merrillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00040685503147648297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-90523456523207666752011-10-22T22:26:03.182-04:002011-10-22T22:26:03.182-04:00Very intriguing tale! ; )Very intriguing tale! ; )Sheri L. Swifthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08585820531737824211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-82995487892074843592011-10-22T21:22:04.127-04:002011-10-22T21:22:04.127-04:00Whoa! That was completely awesome! You have my vot...Whoa! That was completely awesome! You have my vote! I took an environmental approach as well. Great job!<br><br>I'm entry #5Jesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-74098134791102783092011-10-22T21:00:36.295-04:002011-10-22T21:00:36.295-04:00Very nice. I could really picture rolling the bead...Very nice. I could really picture rolling the bead. Mine is #56bridgetstraub.comhttp://bridgetstraub.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1281469968333860626.post-86898078239673053442011-10-22T14:25:11.603-04:002011-10-22T14:25:11.603-04:00Scary vision of the future, but I love the tension...Scary vision of the future, but I love the tension in this piece. I could feel the MC's desperation. And the way you used the words for worldbuilding was brilliant. Well done.AveryMarshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15615057600393412922noreply@blogger.com